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About Me Deviant Member brokenxbeautyFemale/United States Recent Activity
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I posted all of this work in 2006, with no idea or hopes that anyone would ever be able to enjoy my writing. I hoped for critique and self improvement. I hoped to find that I was not alone on the emotional rollercoaster of life.

I wrote these poems in middle school and early high school years to express the depression and feeling utterly lost that I was experiencing. Many have similar feelings growing up.

I hadn't logged into the site for years, when one day I was bored and I did. Only to find out that my "Is it love?" had blown up - been favorited and commented on more times than I ever thought possible.

To everyone who has enjoyed my work and supported me with kind words... I want to say thank you. If you were able to relate or understand, submitting these teen works has been worthwhile. It is impossible for me to reply to each and every comment, but I truly want to say thank you, it put a smile on my face and the fact that to this day...almost 7 years later, people are still enjoying a work I didn't even consider one of my best.

To everyone who says it is not art, required no thought, and that it's on a middle school level... you may be right. It certainly did require a bit of time and thought, who are you to say what went through my mind? It may not be art and I did indeed write it in middle school. But, I never claimed to be an artist. I was simply sharing on a website designed for just that... if you want real literary art, go buy a PUBLISHED work. I'm only glad that I did not read these comments when I was a child, for they truly may have hurt my feelings. You hipsters are real cool for insulting a child behind your computer screen.

On another note, I want to encourage all deviants to keep writing. Practice always equals improvement, and writing is good for the soul. Something I do for myself and not others. I am more into journaling as well as journalism type writing. I am almost finished with school, hoping to be a reporter next year when I graduate.

I will try to be around the community more. Thanks for reading and happy writing!

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:iconnature-in-my-soul:
~Nature-in-my-soul May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
faved oodles of your things and wanted to leave a comment here instead of on each piece because: Poetry speaks what we often find so hard to say.

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First the spoon wasn't real. Then the cake was a lie. What next? The voices in my head are fictitious, too?
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:iconbrokenxbeauty:
doesn't it though :) thanks for the faves!
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Mood: Wow! ~veridisquotwo May 7, 2012  New member Hobbyist General Artist
amazing poems. :)

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~A good art to me has always been like a friend. It keeps me company, comforts and inspires.

I love you Charmaine Aquino! :*
MAHAL NA MAHAL KITA!


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~egoplantt May 5, 2012  New member
ew
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~egoplantt Apr 29, 2012  New member
you look disgusting.
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Mood: Irritated ~veridisquotwo May 7, 2012  New member Hobbyist General Artist
you a hater? go hate yourself. this is not a place for humans like you.

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~A good art to me has always been like a friend. It keeps me company, comforts and inspires.

I love you Charmaine Aquino! :*
MAHAL NA MAHAL KITA!


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=idoartguy May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If she wanted to talk to an asshole, she'd fart.

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Poetry, it can only be described as soul, gathered and shot out through pen onto paper, liquified into a form of passion and love.

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~dressed2undress Apr 26, 2012  Student Artist
i feel like i know you... HEH! talk about CREEPY!!! :meow:

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if i had a chance for another try, i wouldn't change a thing, this made me who i am inside...and every day i wake i tell myself a little harmless lie...'the whole wide world is mine...'
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:iconbrokenxbeauty:
I think that makes sense. Reading my works may have allowed you to know me better than most people do! :)
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