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I really cannot help it,
It says so in my heart,
I really cannot help it,
Though I didn't feel so at the start.

But now we're closer and I realize,
I'm lucky to have you,
All the things you say to me,
The sweetest things you do.

You cheer me up,
When I am down,
You make me smile,
When I frown.

You may not ever realize,
My feelings deep and true,
You may not ever notice,
I can't help loving you.

I'll never stop loving you, there's no way I could.
i secretly love you.
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crazygamermelissa Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT SOMEONE AND I'VE HAD SUCH A HARD TIME TRYING TO PUT THAT FEELING INTO WORDS... AND U DID IT!! PERFECTLY!!!!! <3
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Tyler2019 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's how I feel with me crush
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chrisbrandonwitt1 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
like where these come from,,,,heart
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batgirl103 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
This explains exactly how I feel about someone. ^.^
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HyunJunLee Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha this poem is so true
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TheKHSFan Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
I love all of your poems, they are so beautiful <3
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kagurawind Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Love it
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GalaxyFriday Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
I can really relate to this poem. Wonderful job!
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sleepykarie91 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wish i didn't fall for him again..
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Seth4500 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This reminds me of what I feel towards my crush.
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namitsan Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
this explains so much of my life right now!
thanks for writing it :hug:
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MagicalMoon66 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010
You are a great writer, I love it!
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
This is really cute :hug:
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Paralyzed-Gaze Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
"You may not ever realize,
My feelings deep and true,
You may not ever notice,
I can't help loving you."

These lines were very touchy! Like it! :)
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Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
Aww! I can relate.
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MYNAMEISTHEO Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009
awh.
i know completely how you feel ;)
i love how you completely express
confess and just, let it all out here (:
i love it ><
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Petaldancer Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
I love your poetry. It expresses a lot of situations that people have these days, and it's all true.
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Daughterofthewind Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2006   Writer
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

This is really cute and kind of sad.

Keep it up I really like your work =)
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