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hey, pretty girl,
try not to cry.
i know he broke your heart,
it all was just a lie.

hey, pretty girl,
try and smile just for me.
forget all about him,
he's worthless as can be.

hey, pretty girl,
don't let this bring you down.
you've got far too pretty a smile,
to waste it on a frown.
a relationship based on lies.
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jazewel Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for writing this Heart 
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TigerLove566 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this so much :heart:
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Chronological-Rising Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing ;w;
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debidebdebdeb Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
your lies. the back and forth is getting old. pick one and stick to it. you love me or hate m"(he's worthless as can be")
That's nice. How did I break your heart? I begged you to come back. And what was all just a lie? (besides what you omitted)
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Shinigami-Lollita Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
omg that is soooooo true
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lightningboltzlove Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
i love it. :) a friend dedicated it to me <3 he found it and linked it.
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caybeach Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi this piece was featured here :aww::heart:
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charminator Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice... and simple
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charminator Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice... and simple
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
really great :aww:
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Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
It's a cute poem! Thank you for showing the world that poems don't have to be pages long to be good!
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katt001 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
Thats amazing...I love it so much!
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mistyvision Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
beautiful. amazingly well written
:heart: Kendall
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