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she's the girl who doesn't talk,
too hurt to say a thing.
she's the girl who misses you,
seeing you makes her heart pang.
she's the girl who hardly cries,
she wants to come off tough.
she's the girl who fakes a smile,
you'd never know her life was rough.
she's the girl who you put last,
but say you love her most.
she's the girl who'd cry & cry,
if you became a ghost.
she's the girl who messes up,
she can't do anything right.
she's the girl who gives up first,
no, she won't win the fight.
she's the girl who'd give everything up,
just to be with you.
she's the girl who needs you most,
the girl you look right through.
the girl who's invisible to you.
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jazewel Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
This is the story of my life.
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Treestorm Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Me.....thats me.....
May i use this on my Deviant ID?
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GrayRosesDayly Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow its like looking in a mirror
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DannyFentonfangirl Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Described my life.
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linwriter Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Clear description. Well written. Easy to relate to the emotion of this.
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ghost-viper Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
i love this so much you are so good with poetry
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Nightstripes0987 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Another poetry writer has stolen my diary. Mind if I come up with a little tune to go with it?
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kagurawind Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
I see my self in it too, gosh it's like lookin in the mirror!
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ze1dafreak1 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(T-T ) This hits waaaay to close to home, and for that, I have to love it. People act like I'm a shadow. Never seen but seeing everything, never heard but hearing everything, never needed but needing everyone. This is beautiful.
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kagurawind Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Sounds like someone I know
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