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If I hugged you,
would you never let go?

If I kissed you,
would you cherish that moment?

If I reached for your hand,
would you take mine gently?

If I needed a shoulder,
would you let me cry on yours?

If I needed to talk,
would you really listen?

If I needed to scream,
would you do it with me?

If I needed to go,
would you come with me?

If I fell for you,
would you catch me?
or just let me hit the pavement?
falling in love.
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NearCore Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
thats beautiful
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firekittenx9 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
............once
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe
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shelterxofxwinter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  New member
I like it so much..I find it so amazing..I'm jealous of your writing :p
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The end was such a change, and it was perfect. Because this is exactly what goes through my mind when I'm falling in love. I imagine all the good, but then there's always that lingering fear that goes along with feeling vulnerable. Beautiful.
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MystoryDrawer Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Beautiful simply beautiful
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Nsawatchlist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
Simple but interesting.  I like the poem.
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VanishingPointRacing Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to feel to feel that feeling again... I miss her.
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mutantapk Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I sometimes wonder if she feel the same way.
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duck1112 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
i wonder if he feels that way. :( sometimes i doubt he would. i still love him though <3
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Lilli1221 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I'm in LoVe!!!!!
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