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If I hugged you,
would you never let go?

If I kissed you,
would you cherish that moment?

If I reached for your hand,
would you take mine gently?

If I needed a shoulder,
would you let me cry on yours?

If I needed to talk,
would you really listen?

If I needed to scream,
would you do it with me?

If I needed to go,
would you come with me?

If I fell for you,
would you catch me?
or just let me hit the pavement?
falling in love.
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shelterxofxwinter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  New member
I like it so much..I find it so amazing..I'm jealous of your writing :p
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The end was such a change, and it was perfect. Because this is exactly what goes through my mind when I'm falling in love. I imagine all the good, but then there's always that lingering fear that goes along with feeling vulnerable. Beautiful.
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MystoryDrawer Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Beautiful simply beautiful
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Nsawatchlist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Simple but interesting.  I like the poem.
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VanishingPointRacing Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to feel to feel that feeling again... I miss her.
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mutantapk Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I sometimes wonder if she feel the same way.
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duck1112 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
i wonder if he feels that way. :( sometimes i doubt he would. i still love him though <3
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Lilli1221 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I'm in LoVe!!!!!
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JayAnarchist Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
I've been caught from falling before......but then I was thrown on the pavement. Not very pleasant.
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sushiihamster Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i've hit the pavement before... it's not fun.
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