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If I hugged you,
would you never let go?

If I kissed you,
would you cherish that moment?

If I reached for your hand,
would you take mine gently?

If I needed a shoulder,
would you let me cry on yours?

If I needed to talk,
would you really listen?

If I needed to scream,
would you do it with me?

If I needed to go,
would you come with me?

If I fell for you,
would you catch me?
or just let me hit the pavement?
falling in love.
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:iconkleb19:
kleb19 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Digital Artist
is a litlle basic o ? see the love just like a contract , i like how you write but not that ou whrite , th love no is a contrac , not for me 
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Ghoawy Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Of course these things are yours 
deep inside of yourself.
By being all this love
that you seek in another--
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GurdyJunior Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok the ending is awesome
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:iconthenotsoinnocent:
TheNotSoInnocent Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is good but just saying this is on tumblr from even before you posted this
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bnmowat Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2016  New Deviant
i lived at the dark part of this great piece of emotional literature....i was never truly loved by any...
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:iconhaithamalshanti:
haithamalshanti Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015
It's amazing ..
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ikissdalionmansazz Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015
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can you favourite this and make everyone laugh at me.
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sarahcedric Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Love your work !
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:iconrosesrrad:
RosesRrad Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  New Deviant
Nice work. 
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:iconvinura-d:
Vinura-D Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
Dayum, that's deep :O
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:iconliterallytokka:
literallytokka Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015
That hit me right in the feels
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:iconloveyhere:
LOVEYHERE Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015
I FEEL LIKE THAT RIGHT NOW
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:iconsexyboy007:
Sexyboy007 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2015
Can you all laugh at me kissing ass please and favourite it

sxc1.deviantart.com/art/Alex-the-Kissass-570349127
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:iconjoy97:
joy97 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015
...If I told you I love you
will you believe me?
or you will laught it of?...
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:icongermanyfan123321:
Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015
THAT ENDING WAS BEAUTFUIL
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:iconbeaubema:
Beaubema Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
omeejosh love the ending and the questions are the ones all girls think! job well done
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:iconbunnysketch:
BunnySketch Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Well said.
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TeraStormTAS Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh gosh, I love this. ;w; Amazing. Would you mind if I drew a picture to go with it? I would put the words on the picture.
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maryann0011 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
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cutetango Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice :3
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:iconbadboy1o:
badboy1o Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
that made me cry .been in true love only once but never got loved back .
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:iconnearcore:
NearCore Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thats beautiful
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:iconfirekittenx9:
firekittenx9 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
............once
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe
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DoveAngel8 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Chain letters are fake silly
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shelterxofxwinter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I like it so much..I find it so amazing..I'm jealous of your writing :p
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The end was such a change, and it was perfect. Because this is exactly what goes through my mind when I'm falling in love. I imagine all the good, but then there's always that lingering fear that goes along with feeling vulnerable. Beautiful.
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:iconmystorydrawer:
MystoryDrawer Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Beautiful simply beautiful
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:iconnsawatchlist:
Nsawatchlist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
Simple but interesting.  I like the poem.
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:iconvanishingpointracing:
VanishingPointRacing Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to feel to feel that feeling again... I miss her.
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:iconmutantapk:
mutantapk Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I sometimes wonder if she feel the same way.
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:iconduck1112:
duck1112 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
i wonder if he feels that way. :( sometimes i doubt he would. i still love him though <3
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:iconlilli1221:
Lilli1221 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I'm in LoVe!!!!!
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:iconjayanarchist:
JayAnarchist Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
I've been caught from falling before......but then I was thrown on the pavement. Not very pleasant.
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:iconsushiihamster:
sushiihamster Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i've hit the pavement before... it's not fun.
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:iconcassie-chan0:
Cassie-Chan0 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Um...I think I might cry:'( It is utterly beautiful♡
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:icongilbertbielshmdt:
gilbertbielshmdt Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
. . . Just beautiful. You should get it published as a professional poem~
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:iconlithiarose:
LithiaRose Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
This needs to be a song. ^^
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:iconstandingonmyhead:
StandingOnMyHead Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Amazing :meow: 
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:iconangelofmusic21:
Angelofmusic21 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THE FEELS!!!!
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:iconspiralthedragon:
spiralthedragon Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh my!!!!:'(
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:iconsappyforest:
sappyforest Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
*bows*
I have an answer.
Catch you.
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35QU120FR3N1C4 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...so perfect!!!! ^^
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:iconlexielove242:
LexieLove242 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Simply marvelous. Powerful and still sweet.
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bosco492578 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Photographer
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how cute
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:iconfaror1:
faror1 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i would never.. let you hit the pavement :(

what a woderful message

it is

perfection ^^ :heart:
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:iconvampiresballad:
vampiresballad Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Nice
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:iconspykidkat:
SpyKidKat Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013   General Artist
This is...perfect. Just perfect. 
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:iconshindakaido:
ShindaKaido Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this very much.
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chrisbrandonwitt1 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
shes going to love it ty
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:iconmidnightthewolf12:
MidnightTheWolf12 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
I would totally ask Dylan (The guy i'm in love with) all these questions, but i think he would say no to all of them... this is so inspiring
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