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Pitter Patter, goes the rain.
Her cry, filled with pain.
Where is he?
Where did he go?
Didn't I see him? Just a minute ago?
He was here, and now he's gone.
And now a thought begins to dawn....
He's left her, he's moved on.
She loved him, he loved her too.
Or so she thought, and in her mind, a plan begins to brew.
She'll get back at him, oh yes!
She will, she'll make him pay.
She'll even kill.
He took her heart.
She took her life.
And now that man has lost his wife.
He didn't leave her, he hadn't moved on.
He was too late....and now she's gone.
Pitter Patter goes the rain.
And now his cry is filled with pain.
a tragic misunderstanding.
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Nyah-the-hedgehog Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
again no words
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MidnightMurderZ Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your poetry grabs you from the start and holds you until its done if not longer.
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gakisun4u Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
beautiful *.*
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Alanah123 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010  Student Filmographer
I love youre poetry!!! sad...

Alanah...
LOVE DOESNT EXIST
LOVING DOES
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Carana0 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
I love your poetry! It really just touches me like other poetry doesn't. And this one's really awesome! Tragic, but awesome. :D
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Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
Awh! I love how everything you write just flows!
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