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Sometimes it's easy,
Sometimes it's not.
Sometimes it's cold,
Sometimes it's hot.
Sometimes I smile,
Sometimes I grin.
Sometimes I lose,
Sometimes I win.
Sometimes I pout,
Sometimes I frown.
Sometimes I'm up,
Sometimes I'm down.
Sometimes I'm sweet,
Sometimes I'm nice.
Sometimes sugar,
Sometimes spice.
Sometimes I laugh,
Sometimes I cry.
And then there's those days...
I want to die.
because someone once told me I had no emotions.
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Lunatwisentry Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me and a friend know how this feels
Masked-Rain Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful work on the poem. :heart:
soccer16002 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
i really like this pome 
Jesterkin458 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i know that feeling...emotions can be difficult sometimes, try to control the flow never stop it...
SkyeWolf1312 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I know how that feels.
KyuuketsukiNoShouzo Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Ah...poor thing.. can I give you all my emotions...? I'm too emotional... :cry:
WrathFan99 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah , poor thing .
akashi-kun Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
amazeballs. ur amazing.
MetaOblivion Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Truee that
MidnightMurderZ Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome dude
gakisun4u Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
you dont know how much I sympathice with the poem *_*
theyoungestbrony Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
oh dear... don't hurt yourself, m'kay?
Bre112 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
since its on the topic of emotions- i once asked my friends what it was that they hated about me, they all said "you can be thinking or felling anything and still keep that goofy smile on ur face." that is my strong point, i am good at hiding my thoughts(and i guess if that was it...i am a very likable person).

i just wanted to tell someone that, so thank u.
Frostbite14300 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Same here, I hide my emotions and what's I'm feeling and put on a straight face, no matter what I'm feeling.
fragilehour Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
A nice poem. The end is a bit stupid in my opinion, as the poem is quite a childlike idea of opposites, and it seems like an unfunny joke or something. The only other thing I found strange was the contrast between pout and frown, since the rest of the poem is opposites and yet pout and frown are, usually, portraying similar emotions. But it's your poetry, and your mind, so that's more of me expressing my opinion.
aznlily95 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011
Someone once told me I was the lethargic, apathetic, and out of tune of my own emotions. I love your poem. It really resonates with me.
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
Someone said that i have no emotions as well :no:
Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
No emotions? What are they smoking? Have they read any of your poetry?
theyoungestbrony Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
yeah, right?
TroubleTrouble Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
Great! :)
mina-rakastaa-sina Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like this.
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