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Sometimes it's easy,
Sometimes it's not.
Sometimes it's cold,
Sometimes it's hot.
Sometimes I smile,
Sometimes I grin.
Sometimes I lose,
Sometimes I win.
Sometimes I pout,
Sometimes I frown.
Sometimes I'm up,
Sometimes I'm down.
Sometimes I'm sweet,
Sometimes I'm nice.
Sometimes sugar,
Sometimes spice.
Sometimes I laugh,
Sometimes I cry.
And then there's those days...
I want to die.
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because someone once told me I had no emotions.
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~SkyeWolf1312 May 1, 2013  Student Artist
I know how that feels.
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:iconkyuuketsukinoshouzo:
Ah...poor thing.. can I give you all my emotions...? I'm too emotional... :cry:
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Mood: Sympathy ~WrathFan99 Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah , poor thing .
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:iconakashi-kun:
amazeballs. ur amazing.
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Mood: Joy !MidnightMurderZ Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome dude
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:icongakisun4u:
you dont know how much I sympathice with the poem *_*
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:iconbre112:
since its on the topic of emotions- i once asked my friends what it was that they hated about me, they all said "you can be thinking or felling anything and still keep that goofy smile on ur face." that is my strong point, i am good at hiding my thoughts(and i guess if that was it...i am a very likable person).

i just wanted to tell someone that, so thank u.
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~fragilehour Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
A nice poem. The end is a bit stupid in my opinion, as the poem is quite a childlike idea of opposites, and it seems like an unfunny joke or something. The only other thing I found strange was the contrast between pout and frown, since the rest of the poem is opposites and yet pout and frown are, usually, portraying similar emotions. But it's your poetry, and your mind, so that's more of me expressing my opinion.
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:iconaznlily95:
Someone once told me I was the lethargic, apathetic, and out of tune of my own emotions. I love your poem. It really resonates with me.
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