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Writing one last letter, saying one last good-bye,
My blood falling to the floor, as if coming from the sky.
"You told me that you love me, but we could never be,
I cannot live without you, so I'm doing this you see."
"If we cannot be together, then I don't want to live,
I've got nothing left at all, nothing left to give."
I close the envelope softly, seal it wish a kiss,
Turn to look the other way, and wait for my dismiss.
& it was her final goodbye to the world.
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I-Am-Kira-I-Am-God Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful....really amazing <3
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darknessoverme666 May 13, 2012
Great writing, but cuts a little too close to home. Sounds as if it was written by my soulmate. If she were to actually say her last goodbye, I would be right behind her. I can not, will not, live without her. I would follow her through the gates of Heaven or Heall. to be by her side.
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redella Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very sad...but nicely done! :happybounce: :library:
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:iconlevinsight:
this is so beautiful! :heart:
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:iconliz-elane97:
beautiful, captured the moment perfectly:)
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MidnightMurderZ Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very descriptive very visual its pretty darn cool.
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:iconforeverdreamer95:
Wow. This is very grabbing. It immediately touches your heart, because on some level we've all felt the heart break and depression you portray in your poem. It's very painful, and very beautiful.
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de4thstar Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
<3333333333
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:icondivergirlrocks:
this is amazing! great job!!
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