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Writing one last letter, saying one last good-bye,
My blood falling to the floor, as if coming from the sky.
"You told me that you love me, but we could never be,
I cannot live without you, so I'm doing this you see."
"If we cannot be together, then I don't want to live,
I've got nothing left at all, nothing left to give."
I close the envelope softly, seal it wish a kiss,
Turn to look the other way, and wait for my dismiss.
& it was her final goodbye to the world.
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I-Am-Kira-I-Am-God Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful....really amazing <3
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darknessoverme666 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Great writing, but cuts a little too close to home. Sounds as if it was written by my soulmate. If she were to actually say her last goodbye, I would be right behind her. I can not, will not, live without her. I would follow her through the gates of Heaven or Heall. to be by her side.
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redella Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very sad...but nicely done! :happybounce: :library:
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levinsight Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
this is so beautiful! :heart:
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Liz-Elane97 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
beautiful, captured the moment perfectly:)
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MidnightMurderZ Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very descriptive very visual its pretty darn cool.
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gakisun4u Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
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foreverdreamer95 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
Wow. This is very grabbing. It immediately touches your heart, because on some level we've all felt the heart break and depression you portray in your poem. It's very painful, and very beautiful.
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de4thstar Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
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divergirlrocks Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
this is amazing! great job!!
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