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An open casket,
a black rose.
I bend over her body,
my tears stain her clothes.

I feel their empty hugs,
they say I'm in their prayers.
As I mourn her death,
upon me are their stares.

They say they understand me,
say they know how I feel.
But I can see their steely glares,
they pretend this isn't real.

I say my dear goodbye,
they lower her into the ground.
I throw myself upon the dirt,
and weep without a sound.
death hurts.
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totallyawsomeart24 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011   Digital Artist
wow your poetry it is really good but some of it is really sad but for the most part you are a really good poet
when-souls-unite Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yes it most certainly does...
Hoogabah Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
A beautiful poem. You did a good job. Death hurts so badly. Seeing someone you love lying there in the casket is awful. I don't know about you but I always wish I could hear the person's voice one more time.
Brindlestarr Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I wish i could too.... look in my siggie...youll see what i mean... T.T
Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
Bunnies? well, I like the poem. Flows very nicely.
velvetrose72689 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
wow i really like this ...death really does hurt i know its one of those things thats always in the back of your mind forever... at least thats how it is for me :blackrose:
SteveyN Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol at your sig, my name is steve
velvetrose72689 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
Hmmm well are you an evil bunny ? :blackrose:
SteveyN Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i can be, very evil indeed, but bunny? i dont know. XD
velvetrose72689 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2008
hmmm *ponders* i can buy you bunny ears then you can be an evil bunny :D
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