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An open casket,
a black rose.
I bend over her body,
my tears stain her clothes.

I feel their empty hugs,
they say I'm in their prayers.
As I mourn her death,
upon me are their stares.

They say they understand me,
say they know how I feel.
But I can see their steely glares,
they pretend this isn't real.

I say my dear goodbye,
they lower her into the ground.
I throw myself upon the dirt,
and weep without a sound.
death hurts.
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totallyawsomeart24 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011   Digital Artist
wow your poetry it is really good but some of it is really sad but for the most part you are a really good poet
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when-souls-unite Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yes it most certainly does...
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Hoogabah Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
A beautiful poem. You did a good job. Death hurts so badly. Seeing someone you love lying there in the casket is awful. I don't know about you but I always wish I could hear the person's voice one more time.
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Brindlestarr Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I wish i could too.... look in my siggie...youll see what i mean... T.T
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Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
Bunnies? well, I like the poem. Flows very nicely.
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velvetrose72689 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
wow i really like this ...death really does hurt i know its one of those things thats always in the back of your mind forever... at least thats how it is for me :blackrose:
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SteveyN Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol at your sig, my name is steve
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velvetrose72689 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
Hmmm well are you an evil bunny ? :blackrose:
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SteveyN Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i can be, very evil indeed, but bunny? i dont know. XD
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velvetrose72689 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2008
hmmm *ponders* i can buy you bunny ears then you can be an evil bunny :D
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