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I'm sorry for the things I do,
sorry for the things I say.
Sorry that I talked to you,
sorry that I'm this way.

I'm sorry that I trusted you,
and sorry that I lied.
Sorry that I laughed at you,
sorry that I cried.

I'm sorry that I hated you,
I'm sorry I loved you too,
I'm sorry that you broke my heart,
and that it still belongs to you.
©2006-2009 ~brokenxbeauty
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A poem saying sorry to true love.

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Don't be sorry about being yourself.
Don't be sorry about falling in love.
Be happy that you're living life.
And look forward to new adventures.

But as for the poem itself, it flows well, but i personally think it needs to be longer and have more explanation. Why are you sorry I mean.

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I can't remember why I'm sorry, I was searching through my computer and found it.
agh. ><
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thats a purty poem rach really purty even though its short its really good. and it rally doesnt needa say why your sorry cuz when each person reads it they can think of what they are sorry for :) great job

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:iconangerous:
Very nice...I like short poems...I feel like they say much more.

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uh... short yet i could feel the pain still. nice one, it makes me wanna cry... huhuhu.
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enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing your art.

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AMAZING:P AHMAGAD!! <3333

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wow :O nice poem and sometime they are better short so the readers can relate, anyway great job

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