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I'm sorry for the things I do,
sorry for the things I say.
Sorry that I talked to you,
sorry that I'm this way.

I'm sorry that I trusted you,
and sorry that I lied.
Sorry that I laughed at you,
sorry that I cried.

I'm sorry that I hated you,
I'm sorry I loved you too,
I'm sorry that you broke my heart,
and that it still belongs to you.
A poem saying sorry to true love.
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WindowsillGirl Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Perfect
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Epicmickey1000 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
i have a true love and i broke our friendship for an apparent reason and thi might help me apologize to him and i cried to this...so touching and BEAUTIFUL *cries* lol sadness
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walkeritout Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I've never been much of a poetry guy, but everything you write is incredible. This is probably my favourite, it really resonates with me.
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Elaje Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how i feel in every pool of shadows that awaits my sleep :'(
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hellWithAHeartbeat Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
your poems move me hat is all i can say
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flamecoyote Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012   Photographer
aw i can realate too much
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Ryugaknight Featured By Owner May 14, 2012
I know how this feels.
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SteamHead1880 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My lord this spoke to me.
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DoctorCarton Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student General Artist
Great wrting,
wish I could be so to the point.

drama...
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sodapop-appletini Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I put this in my story?(if I ever make one)
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gakisun4u Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
:'(
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ChatterMsBox Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student Photographer
I love this!
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Faebsman Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I love it. :3
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xxYashxx Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
damn love it!! <333
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OneLoveOneMoment6790 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it. Its so simple but so true and applies to many situations.
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thisis2me Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011   Writer
that's beautiful. do you really feel that way?
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cellovader206 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010   Writer
I love this, especially because I can relate so much... I apologize for a LOT of things, probably unnecessarily.
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Kali62 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
it's beautiful :3
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Dare143Devil Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
aaah, i can relate so so so much!!!
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snowing-in-july Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
i really like the ending line!
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xXCOOKIESRMLXx Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009
Honey, I would give constructive critisism like I usually do, but I can't find anything wrong with it. It is amazing. You should really publish your poems. You could earn a lot of money, sweetheart. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! :heart: xoxo
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Doomblader Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009
wow :O nice poem and sometime they are better short so the readers can relate, anyway great job
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de4thstar Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
AMAZING:P AHMAGAD!! <3333
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
:hug:
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genelovesyou Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009
enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing your art.
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bhudai Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
uh... short yet i could feel the pain still. nice one, it makes me wanna cry... huhuhu.
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Angerous Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2006
Very nice...I like short poems...I feel like they say much more.
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BlindRage19 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2006
thats a purty poem rach really purty even though its short its really good. and it rally doesnt needa say why your sorry cuz when each person reads it they can think of what they are sorry for :) great job
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-poetic-tragedy- Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2006
Don't be sorry about being yourself.
Don't be sorry about falling in love.
Be happy that you're living life.
And look forward to new adventures.

But as for the poem itself, it flows well, but i personally think it needs to be longer and have more explanation. Why are you sorry I mean.
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brokenxbeauty Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2006  Student
I can't remember why I'm sorry, I was searching through my computer and found it.
agh. ><
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