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As they look upon her casket,
tears in their eyes,
wondering why she did this,
they can't seem to help but cry.

What they don't know would hurt them,
suicide was her dismiss,
but could you call it suicide?
she was dead so long before this.
a short poem i wrote after a long time of not writing.
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reneemon45 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
exactly how most depressed people feel. I know I've been there
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webmasterseb Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome.
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chashanae Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
This is my sentiment exactly.
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flamecoyote Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012   Photographer
it touches you
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Shane-Bow Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this
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CandiiLovex33 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful.
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ToLove2day Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. All I have to say.
Wow.
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Ardunie Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Writer
itīs my favorite. itīt sad but with a deep that is amazing
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OverlordAyame Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad but so beautifull!
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satans-eloquence Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
so true.
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Danni0624 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
wow :sniff:
i love your poetry
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InuzukaNaminaChan Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
I can't say it's beautiful when it's so true. :(
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ScarletSpirits Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Very touching. I love it! Expect that I'm going read every song you have written :D :heart:
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OpheliaRoseEA Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student
Sadly, you're right when you write (lol) "she was dead so long before this". I like how you're putting it out there. Props.
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MUSiiCxMANiiAC Featured By Owner May 29, 2010
You've been featured: [link] :D
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Pamplemousse-6 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
oh. wow. That may be short, but it is rather deep. Simple, but very effective. Especially the last line.
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