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You left me here,
alone in the cold.
I can almost see the wind blow.
It brings back memories,
memories of you.
The way you used to smile,
you know, back we were two.
three musketeers minus one, "best friends".
The warth of your hug,
and those silly jokes you told,
while trying to cheer me up, force one smile out of me.
I opened up to you, telling you everything.
& now thinking back I realize...
you told me nothing.
Nothing worth knowing, anyway.
Whatever happened? Did you just get bored?
I'm not always cheery, not always interesting,
but I thought best friends was more than that.
Maybe I was too eager,
eager to believe I finally had someone,
some to call my best friend.
Because you...
you were the closest to it,
almost the closest I'd ever had.
& now,
now you're just every other "friend" in the hallway.
what does 'best friend' really mean?
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ThisEcuadorianBoi Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
This is ... AMAZING ^.<
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gamepwn Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
It's the worst feeling in the world. Feeling alone, forgotten about to people you once considered yourself to be so close with. When they don't even seem to give a shit after all the little moments and times you had together. Life is a mystery that likes to shove a shitload of surprises on you.
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gamepwn Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
This made me feel like crying :( I've lost my best friend this year and last year it was a girlfriend that moved away and just forgot about me and goes off falling for some other guy. Like that. Not to mention many people I once trusted are gone. Beautiful poem my friend. I feel like never opening myself up to anyone again or trusting anyone again.
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kagurawind Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
So true! Love it, can relate!
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Elaje Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought you'd want to know that this poem made me cry
And also that not a single book or poem has ever made me cry before.
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TriSarahTops14 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
Made me cry...
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OverlordAyame Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why does this poem fit me so much...well my bestfriend hasn't left me yet but still why...
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gakisun4u Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
heart ache ><
:'(

It's so beautiful
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Resa-chan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
This happened to me before. :/ But, now I have a person who really is my best friend. He's a better friend then anyone else will ever have. ^^
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skyeatsarin Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010
Wow, made me sadface. :/ But I really like your writing. Keep it up.
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